If I were single, how would be my life different?
Marriage life for a woman is very tough. In my case, before I got married, I did all the things what I want. I met my friends anytime, spent money for myself and relaxed whenever I wanted to. But now I am always busy doing housework and taking care of my family. My head is full of thinking about my family. Sometimes I envy my friends who is not married. It would be happy to imagine myself living in a single woman.
I would take a lot of rest at home if I were single. For example, at legal holidays like new year and Chuseok, I would not busy preparing foods and buying presents for my family in law. All I would do is to enjoy delicious food and go to a movie. I would travel more frequently alone. I would not have to worry about family and could enjoy my trip more.
At my work, I could devote myself on my job. I could overwork everyday, even I could work late on the weekend. I could eat out with my colleagues every dinner that makes me easy to get a lot of latest information around my work. I would not prepare breakfast for my family so I could come to my office early in the morning and study English before I start working. I might not to worry about transferring because I would ready to do hard work at any division.
I would not have to take care of my family so I would have less responsibilities. I could do anything what I want that means I could change my job. I could be a tour conductor which I eager to become. My activities could be wide enough that I could have a lot of opportunities to meet various kind of people. I could have a lot of time to read books, I would became more intelligent.
It is certain that my life as single would be enjoyable much more than now. My behavior would be more free and I could do more what I want. But when I recall my time as single, I envied married friends very much at that time. I have matured a lot though marriage. Although there would be an opportunity to change my life to be single, I would never take it because my family is so precious to me at present.
May 17, 2008
If I were single
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Your essay is a great to understand, especially the introduction is excellent.
However there are a few of jobs to think of for better essay.
At the body paragraphs. It is hard to topic sentence except to second one.The second body about your work is a good work so that all ideas are related to each other like one family, but I think the rest of bodies have several ideas in each paragraph.
At the frist body, there are a little bit of different ideas like to take a rest at home, to go to a movie and to travel alone. The third one also has the same things as the frist. It has some different ideas such as changing job and reading books. Finally, I think the conclusion paragraph couldn't keep your way to the end of writing essay, even though you want to express your real heart.
good luck
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