Different nations for different tourists
As the increase of income, people go abroad for sightseeing more often than before. There are lots of nations in package program from the travel agency. People choose nations and tour package according to their taste. It would be very important to choose the nations considering the tour members. The destination would be different if there are children or seniors. It also could be specialized to a honeymoon couple.
To a family with young children, it is recommended for tour places which have amusement park, zoo, aquarium, theme park or beach. Hong Kong, Tokyo, USA have Disneyland which children have enthusiasm for. Singapore has huge bird park called Jurong Bird Park and an aquarium. Guam, Sipan, and other East Asian nations with resort and beach are suitable for families with kids to stay in comfortable. These nations are not too far to fly, and usually the program has a lot of spare time to relax to enjoy separately.
To seniors, they prefer historical place, religion place or hot spring resort. Japan, China, Taiwan, Vietnam and other Europe countries are frequently visited places. For a pilgrimage to the Holy Land, people travel Israel, Egypt, Italy, etc. Seniors also like to stay in spar resort. Japan has many famous places for spa. But most important thing to senior travelers is that the tour should be comfortable and not be tired.
To the honeymooners, their travel should be most impressive and separated from other tourists. Travel agencies offers special honeymoon program for newly weds. These days, they developed luxury pool villas in Asia. They located in a beautiful beach and each room has its own pool. A newly married couple can enjoy their honeymoon in separated resort swimming secret pool of their own.
According to increase of opportunities for travel, it becomes important to choose suitable place to the various travelers. Every country has its own characteristics for sightseeing. We have to make tour plans considering our tour members. It will be different if we have kids, seniors, or we are newly weds. If our choice is successful, our memories from tour will be really happy and precious.
Jun 8, 2008
Various destinations for tourists
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Good afternoon, Lily.
I read your good writing. I can understand your essay clearly. You use adverb and link well. I think that introduction and conclusion are composed well. However I think what if some sentences revise like below.
1. Hongkong, Tokyo, USA → Honkong, Tokyo and USA
2. the program has a lot of spare time → the programs have a lot of spare times.
3. But most important thing → But the most important thing
4. their travel should be most impressive → their travel should be the most impressive
5. Travel agencies offers → Travel agencies offer
6. A newly married couple → A new couple
7. in separated resort swimming secret pool of their own → I was confused in this sentence
8. We have to make tour plans considering our tour members
→ They have to make tour plans considering their tour members
9. It will be different if we have kids, seniors, or we are newly weds.
→ omission or modification
→ It will be different according to whom tour members are, or whether they are new couple.
10. our memories from tour will be really happy and precious.
→ They can really have happy and precious memories from tour.
My editing is just my opinion. I want my proposal will be reference to you.
Have a nice sunday. See you again with good feeling tomorrow.
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