This is Judy's house, a friend of mine. I'll explain the 2'nd floor in this paper.
Upstairs oh the house, there are two bedrooms, one bathroom, a toilet, and a laundry room.
On north center, there is a master bedroom. This room is for Judy's parents'. Against of the north wall are a green bed and two side tables on either side of the bed.
At the door of this bedroom, there are a walk-in closet on either side of the door. It's very useful to keep all clothes hide and clean.
In the left side of the bedroom is a master bathroom with 2 basins, a toilet and bathtub. I think it's a little big compared by other place. In the right side of the room is a balcony.
To the right of the master bedroom, there is another bedroom. This bedroom2 has a bed and two side tables like master bedroom on its left side. On the north corner are a table and window to a balcony which also connected to the master bedroom. To the right of the door, there is a closet, too.
To the south of the floor, there are a laundry room and a toilet.
I think this house is well and efficiently designed.
Apr 7, 2008
Floor Plan 2.
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1. Is the paragraph interesting?
Yes, it's quite interesting
you explain in detail using
ajective
2. Do you understand everything?
I surely understand
3. Would you like more information about anything?
it would be better if you tell about the stair
4. Does the paragraph begin with a topic sentence?
you mentioned a simple fact about the house.
5. In your opinion, what is the best feature of this paragraph? In other words, what is this writer's best writing skill?
Best feature is "It's very useful to keep all clothes hide and clean."
you did a good job!!
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