When I was a child, I would spend time at the mountain in the back of my house. I used to catch grasshoppers, barbecue and eat them with my friends. At that time, I thought it was very yummy, but nowadays I can't eat, even catch it.
At the backyard of my house, my father made me a wooden cabin, I would spend all the afternoon with my sister. It was a small castle to us.
During my middle schooldays, I would listen to pop songs of ABBA, Carpenters, Beatles, etc. During these days, I would join the Literature Club, and would read poems.
When I think my schooldays, I must have been very weak compared by other friend. I would have a cold often and get tired easily. After I back home from school, first of all I would take a nap before dinner. Subsequently, taking a nap is my most favorite time till now.
Time goes so fast, but I feel very happy when I memorize my schooldays, especially the time playing at the mountain with my friends.
1 comment:
I could understand well your childhood and schooldays by reading your essay. Spacially the conclusion express well your feeling on the past.
But I propose some amended items to you. I think It's better to be a prescription at the beginning and the text is divided by 2 paragraph, childhood and schooldays.
I could understand what you imply.
grammar
1. I would spend → I used spend
2. I would join → I have joined
3. When I think my schooldays,I must have been very weak → In my schooldays, I must used to very weak
3. After back home from school → After I came back to home from school
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